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Heartwood | Eleven: The Storm (Link)

Hi guys! So, it’s finally that time where I post my chapter, but since this one’s not safe for work, it’s on a password protected page.

I didn’t actually want to do it like this. I argued back and forth, because I honestly think it’s silly that we’re hiding our nudes this way, but since WordPress has a policy against sharing this type of content on their services (i.e. the Dashboard), I decided to just do it. So you may have seen the previous post and realised you can’t actually go into it because it’s password protected. Well, now you can.

Before you do:

  • This chapter has sexual descriptions and nudity.
  • I try and be less crass and more sultry and romantic, but they do, indeed, do some sex. Parts are mentioned.
  • If you’re very squeamish, it won’t hurt to skip this one.

Now with that in mind, click the below link and use password: ‘lightning’ (no quotes).

Heartwood | Eleven: The Storm

6 Comments

  • audreyfld

    Holy cow that was hot! All that time spent together for them to finally really connect with and be vulnerable with each other. It was sad she really only ever had sex – they just made love. He made love to her and cherished her. It was so sweet. And I loved that they joked a little afterwards. I think theyโ€™ve found what each one needed, each other. โค๏ธ

    • NotJustaBook

      ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜ I’m glad you liked it, Audrey. Posting this type of content – even if I love it unapologetically – is always nerve-wracking.
      You’re very right about that. Lia never really connected with anyone this way and Teo is a very different kind of guy from the usual people she slept with. And yeah, they already have little inside jokes. They’re a good fit. ๐Ÿ˜Š

  • Lila Remonn

    Omg, mobile WP isnโ€™t letting me post my comment on the actual chapter so Iโ€™m going to paste it over here! Lesson learnt not to comment on mobile ever again ๐Ÿ˜’

    I love the deep blue stormy pictures! Very visceral and sets such a strong atmosphere for the chapter, especially in comparison to the fiery tones later to illustrate that shift in mood.
    And well written scenes as well! I think it goes to say that if I could read it then you achieved that middle point with the storytelling emphasis. Thereโ€™s nothing that puts me off more than a super graphic dick description, like no thanks ๐Ÿคฃ This was very romantic and sensual and it was so nice that Lia finally got to be with someone who truly cares about her โค๏ธ Girl deserved that magic, haha. Yay for them being happy together ๐Ÿ˜Œ

    • NotJustaBook

      Meh, it seems like this password thing is causing issues with comments. Next time I’ll just air out my smut. WP be damned. ๐Ÿ™„

      I’m glad you liked the chapter, Lila. ๐Ÿ™‚ I actually wrote a love scene in a storm for Lia and Enzo back in the day, but it didn’t end up fitting them so well and also I had no editing skills to pull it off back then rip. ๐Ÿคฃ Glad I could bring my vision to life for this one, though. ๐Ÿ˜Š
      I have achieved the impossible!! ๐Ÿคฃ Loool. Jokes aside, while working on this I realised that while I can read like, super graphic descriptions without issue (will happily listen to extremely smutte audiobooks on the train with a completely neutral face), I don’t like writing them myself. For me it’ll always be about the emotional connection as much as (or more than) titillating. I’m glad I managed to pull it off in a way that’s not off-putting. ๐Ÿ˜Š
      Thanks for reading, Lila! ๐Ÿ’•

  • Jowita

    I think youโ€™ve done it all tastefully. And it was great to see them both finally give in after all the sexual tension thatโ€™s been going on. Your pictures are so beautiful. And itโ€™s raining now where I am so I could better imagine the storm, lol. The ending was so funny after all the quite poetic descriptions. Did Teo amuse himself with Kama sutra when he was bored, waiting for the cookies to bake? Thatโ€™s the real question ๐Ÿคฃ

    • NotJustaBook

      Thanks a lot, Jowita. ๐Ÿ™‚ He, he, yeah that’s what I love about these types of scenes – that tension finally being released. Glad you like the pictures as well – the amount of editing was intense. ๐Ÿ˜‚
      Looooooool, that idea made me chuckle. Maybe he did. ๐Ÿ˜

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